Ode To A Vegetable Man
The Vegetable Man wakes once moreanother casualty of the drug warGovernment check every monthnow he can afford drugs for lunchPays his rent for a cheap dirty roommakes no differance he's sealed his...
View ArticleRe: Ode To A Vegetable Man
I half feel sad for these pathetic wasters, it's got to be hard living with these addictions, but then.. ultimately, we all have a choice, good subject matter dear friend, BG
View ArticleRe: Ode To A Vegetable Man
The choice not to rhyme in the final line gives it just the emphasis it needs to deliver the impact. Good work!~Erin
View ArticleRe: Ode To A Vegetable Man
I agree with Erin! This is such a sad situation in our times. I saw a woman just the other day that must of weighed 50lbs! Good piece, Paura!
View ArticleRe: Ode To A Vegetable Man
Hi PNella,In the simplicity of a veggie man, this piece evokes the most dire of needs, indeed sad in its reality. The couplets lend to the delivery of a two punch drama for the reader. They get you...
View ArticleRe: Ode To A Vegetable Man
Dig it. I knew lots of guys who came back and were never the same. Love on, dude.BTW, black Label beer or whiskey?
View Article
